Woah, man! Awesome!
I have to start by saying your tone is amazing. Incredible tenor chops you've got. And the splicing of the sound clips together is quite cutely amusing (no, this doesn't make sense). However, the piece is somewhat detracted from as it really is more of some very nice lics, and has little direction after 40 seconds or so. It just switches tones.
Great job though, you'll surpass me in no time. Or maybe you already have :P